Tuesday, January 24, 2012

Stepping Out Of This Life, Back In 5 Minutes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fear. My lips moving.
Saying something.
What is it? I can't hear myself, even my thoughts are muffled.
My heart beating.
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Patti Masterman
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Smoky Hoss 28 January 2012

This is flat-out awesome, I truly love this one Patti, you have out done yourself here. Especially the last five lines, you've colored the blue within living so sweetly. You're poetry grows far beyond the limits of easy-vision, and well into the realm of a holy fire. Keep burnin' the words my friend.

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