Still Poem by Fate McFate

Still



It's here that I lost it
It's all over on this crafted walls
Inscriptions of desire
Where I couldn't wish to look farther.

The scent of a blissful whimpering awoke my stubs,
In the midnight void I was coaxed in a dream,
Why should this sweet mellow exhume my bygones?
Down the meadow I danced towards the fountain.

She lay gazing at eternity,
My stubs identified with her serenity,
Like soul mates; we lay gazing at eternity,
As my stubs reinvented in her serenity.

Still I lay drunken and wet in the meadow,
Still she cling to the fading rose I put on her saree,
Still I look at eternity in her profound serenity,
Still I lay dreaming.

Saturday, November 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Njuguna Peter Mnyagia 29 November 2015

Am humbled Shakil Ahmed for your comment

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Shakil Ahmed 28 November 2015

Still I lay drunken and wet in the meadow, Still she cling to the fading rose I put on her saree, Still I look at eternity in her profound serenity, Still I lay dreaming. Beautiful ending, i enjoyed reading the poem, thanks for sharing.

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