poeticgirl 100993

Rookie (october 9,1993 / balanga, bataan)

Still Young - Poem by poeticgirl 100993

during our younger years, you decided to leave and surrender,
what you promised that you used to say it would be forever,
i was not hurt that time, for you, i didn't care,
and the game between the two of us, because of me, was unfair.

year by year, you came,
but i realized, you were already lame,
year by year, you embark,
and often, you used to left me in the dark.

then, as usual, someone broke your heart again,
and i, without idea, if you were left in pain,
your tired heart, i do not know, if it was already drained,
and so your puzzled mind, still thinking of how many times your beaus left you in the rain.

this year has come and there you are,
coming back, and said that your journey wasn't that far,
remembering how many times you left, thinking you are a liar,
though, you're trying to approach, and becoming as sweet as sugar.

telling you loved them, but you love me more,
wanting to push you through that open door,
again, i do not want to feel any sore,
and experience that this whole body, once again, will be tore.

happy that you have proved that you will never leave,
your promises again, i'm wishing you will never weave,
'cause in this situation, i am not going to believe,
for every sweet words can easily deceive.

you were just the one i've met who face your fear,
and listened to their words so awkward to hear,
though, i saw in your eyes that you control your tear,
and the nervous feeling you just couldn't bear.

this is not the right time to be together,
for we are still young and there's so many things for us will dare,
waiting for me in couples and couples of years will be better,
and when we reached that moment, even you, i will not surrender. :)


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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 27, 2010



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