poeticgirl 100993

Rookie (october 9,1993 / balanga, bataan)

Simply Rejected - Poem by poeticgirl 100993

catching a glimpse of the others
something triggers my mind to wonder
most choose a world they more prefer
yet, they still can't find what makes them happier.

in that most existing group, you want to fraternize
but showing you, they are more modernized
you do not belong, a thing you'll realize
in spite of that, you're still the one to apologize.

your puzzled and baffled mind, you try to deepen
concerns for them, can't be paid by trillion cents
in every actions, you attempt not to be negligent
for them not to judge you as a fatuity nonexistent.

trying to speak just a simple phrase
but they simple take you out of place
you have just proved that people have different taste
perchance, they just cannot appreciate your natural haste.

contented having your infrequent peers
who consistently open your closed ears
that from others' simple reaction, they just reveal
they cannot be friends who are genuine and real.

SIMPLY REJECTED..that's what you are
but never ever feel so ill-starred
in their life, someday you'll play a part
remember that you are more blessed for having a GOOD HEART.

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  • (5/6/2011 5:39:00 AM)


    Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, May 6, 2011


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