Wednesday, April 9, 2008

Stolen Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

To swim in an ocean of you
Surely I would drown with elation
As if the sun itself bowed down low
and kissed my lips
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Jamie Ellen Christian
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The storm and volcano... I think they do need each other and you've said it so beautifully...

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Barbara Terry 09 April 2008

Very romantic Jamie, and very heartfelt and soulful. The emotion that fills these lines, could be food for a novel. The images you paint here, are first rate. If everyone felt this way about each other, then we would have a very wonderful world. By the way; when we are lost to the throes of love, we do forget our name. Take care Jamie, and keep writing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Jamie Ellen Christian

Jamie Ellen Christian

St. Louis, Missouri
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