Booming and Baning thunder in the air
Crashing and Rumbling waves against wet rock
Bombing and scraping, lighting the sky
Swishing and Sloshing rain on a windscreen
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I am in hospital because I had an accident. That happened when I was in Chennai. Kalyan saved me from it.
wow--beautiful onomatopoeia of words here like river flowing from ur mouth in verses of poetry to be the water adding life to readers.
Lovely onomatopoeia poem - great imagery wow your only 13! You are a superstar in the making! Everyone should read this - great imagination - keep writing - SG xo
Just kidding about everything I said i lied i hate your poems and your ugly face
Its not really onomatopoeia is it? Its BOOM! not BOOMING! ! ! dummy xxxxx I did really like it otherwise thpugh! I mean maybe I am wrong? I am only in yr 7 so I might not be right! ! xxxxx