Monday, June 13, 2011

Storm-Onomatopoeia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Booming and Baning thunder in the air
Crashing and Rumbling waves against wet rock
Bombing and scraping, lighting the sky
Swishing and Sloshing rain on a windscreen
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Olisha Starr
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Its not really onomatopoeia is it? Its BOOM! not BOOMING! ! ! dummy xxxxx I did really like it otherwise thpugh! I mean maybe I am wrong? I am only in yr 7 so I might not be right! ! xxxxx

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Troll face 12 February 2019

Eat nasty big hunter nooby

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Seetha 27 December 2019

I am in hospital because I had an accident. That happened when I was in Chennai. Kalyan saved me from it.

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John cabot noobies 12 February 2019

I poopy in my doopy u suck

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Allemagne Roßmann 15 August 2011

wow--beautiful onomatopoeia of words here like river flowing from ur mouth in verses of poetry to be the water adding life to readers.

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Shadow Girl 13 June 2011

Lovely onomatopoeia poem - great imagery wow your only 13! You are a superstar in the making! Everyone should read this - great imagination - keep writing - SG xo

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Shadow Girl 12 February 2019

Just kidding about everything I said i lied i hate your poems and your ugly face

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