… Strange True Love … Poem by Adroit Angel

… Strange True Love …



Love can prove to be strange
It can go to any limit just to range
One day it can make you so pleased
The other day it can be decreased
Your lover will fight with you
And abandon you for a day or two
Your friends come to your rescue
After that you'll rue
While angry he'll not know what you say and what you don't
You'll be totally be taut
His heart wishes to see you
His eyes desire to see you
But he turns his back around
He'll not appreciate what he's found
You're a total gem and you know it
He'll say you're not fit
To be his girlfriend, but the next day
He'll shine like the sun's ray
Hug you and kiss you
He'll yell, my love is true
Did he get hit by an apple?
Or is his love just unstable
That his love ranges from time to time
His love songs change from rhyme to rhyme
He says I love you and I hate you at the same moment
Altogether it's pleasant and unpleasant
Sometimes he thinks his love is forceful
But you know better to know it's colourful
You know him only too well
To hide in your own shell
You love him forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ludicrous Angel 09 March 2012

thanks a lot! i really appreciate it! comments like that boost my confidence. your poems are much more than just lovely. keep it up! !

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Wahab Abdul 08 March 2012

UNBEALIABLE! I WISH I COULD WRITE THIS POEM! I AM REALLY STUNNED AND SPEECHLESS, …YOU ARE REALLY A TALENTED ONE, I LIKE THE WAY PUT THE THINGS TOGETHER, YOUR POEM IS A MIND STORMING ONE ……BUT VERY SOOTHING TO THE SOUL, I LIKE IT AND I LIKE TO YOU MY NEW POEMS, ESPECIALLY ‘’I WANT TO DIE’’

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