Stream Of Consciousness Poem by Upendra Majhi

Stream Of Consciousness

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we got one more stream,
stream of water, air, of three dimensions
stream of consciousness,
it is of five dimensions.
or may be more,
five senses put inputs into you,
and you put it in the Thought Register,
locus of thoughts,
that travels full logical length,
or dies halfway like a desert river,
all you put in a register page.
and see what happens.

Thursday, January 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: consciousness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 25 January 2018

Stream of consciousness/it is of five dimensions........insightful analysis of the term 'Consciousness'! I would further quote, five senses put inputs into you/and you put it in the Thought Register/locus of thoughts. Thanks for presenting a piece of write that carries meticulous and in-depth analysis of the key facet of human psyche!

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Rajnish Manga 25 January 2018

Eagerly waiting for celebrating your 300th poem on PH.

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Rajnish Manga 25 January 2018

The way you have articulated and treated the subject makes the poem a pleasure to read. Thanks. locus of thoughts.... that travels fulllogical length, or dies halfway like a desert river,

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Gajanan Mishra 25 January 2018

locus of thoughts, very good, namaskar sir.

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