Tuesday, September 1, 2015
Strength Within. Comments
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It's like I'm jumping in an ocean, when I can't even swim.
As I'm splashing and stroking, yet I can't just give in.
I'm forgetting what's at focus, As my breatheline runs thin.
Yet I'm praying and I'm hoping, Cause your my strength that's within.
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Kelly Kurt
02 September 2015
Nicely done, Luis. That is how many poems begin; popping into the head and mixing with your feelings. Keep writing. Peace
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3/13/2026 8:51:51 AM # 1.0.0
Thank you kelly Kurt. I honestly forgot I had ever written this. Thank you so much