Thursday, October 16, 2008

Struggling Through. Comments

Rating: 5.0

When life seems to blunder into disorder
And rips all our sense of proportion asunder,
Discontented confusion reigns high on agenda.
We muddle on through then - we do not go under.!
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Fiona Davidson 14 November 2008

A good descriptive piece Fay...disorder always takes it's time to become order...like this one...thank you...

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Susan Jarvis 28 October 2008

The sense of speed and disorder in this poem belies its rational message. Fay, you have a special way with words. A therapeutic piece. S :)

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Tom Balch 16 October 2008

We all muddle through some times, but its time that it needs.10 from Tom, well penned Fay

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 October 2008

Life can be like that some times like you say so well, we muddle our way through... andrew 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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