Friday, July 8, 2011

Stucked Between Friendship, Love And Conscience! Comments

Rating: 4.5

Now i'm stucked between love, friendship and conscience!
How could this happen to me, why me?
I told him i'd never leave, and i told her i'd never let
a guy come between us! Now i'm stucked with my conscience.!
Its killing me, its over powering my heart and mind!
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 July 2011

Praising too much would be flattery. I just want to say that the poem was outstanding written well with nice texture and imagery. Kudos to you. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Best regards Akmal

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Esther Rowe

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