Substance's Eagered Will Poem by Dim Ring

Substance's Eagered Will

Rating: 2.5


Galloping air, bands open,
while shades smudge, their being.
Drilling, carefree judgment again,
in hopes to cause, hazed will.
They seek, decent innocence,
storied, as common'd, as they are.
Willed with choice, storming cowardly,
while placing assurance, mischievously.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noha Ramzy 30 September 2005

i liked the poem Dim, it is with a deep thoughs and wrote with a nice way well done thanks N.R

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