Friday, September 30, 2005

Substance's Eagered Will Comments

Rating: 2.5

Galloping air, bands open,
while shades smudge, their being.
Drilling, carefree judgment again,
in hopes to cause, hazed will.
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Dim Ring
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Noha Ramzy 30 September 2005

i liked the poem Dim, it is with a deep thoughs and wrote with a nice way well done thanks N.R

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