Monday, November 7, 2005

Sufferance Comments

Rating: 4.5

Pain too overbearing.
Love lost in the times.
I cry for seemingly no reason.
My world hurts so much.
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Tim McLaughlin
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***** ********* 07 November 2005

Very good poem Tim. Love does bite hard sometime or another, best get it over with early imo. But don't let it make you bitter, which I doubt as your final lines suggest. Write it out as you are, I have been doing it for 38 months now! ! ! lol 9 from an expert of love, in all it's forms Tai

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Tim McLaughlin

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