Tuesday, July 8, 2008

Suffocating Comments

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the walls are coming closer,
caving in a scared and lonely me
boxing my torn up heart in.
my life briefly flashes past my eyes,
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ally lira
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Daedalus Labyrinth 08 July 2008

Your emotion comes through quite powerfully in your writing. Very well done

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