Thursday, June 4, 2009

Suicide Kiss Comments

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Suicide kiss, kiss my life away
because its my last chance to live for another day
your kiss taste like razor blades when you put your lips near me
it cuts me into sadness when the time I feel lonely
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Andrew Tom
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 January 2016

your kiss taste like razor blades when you put your lips near me it cuts me into sadness when the time I feel lonely, , so points to something dark.. love, relationship, should it end in a terrible way. your poem is full of emotion and you use words powerfully to express what is in your mind. thank you. tony

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Crystal Thomas 10 January 2010

wow i love that poem.

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