Summer Ball Poem by Brian Strand

Summer Ball

Rating: 4.3


Love
blossomed
suddenly
that evening
they met by chance, in the 'excuse -me' dance

Saturday, December 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The Tetractys form was devised by the late English poet Ray Stebbing.The challenge to express a complete thought, profound or comic, witty or wise, within the narrow compass of a five line 20 syllable(1,2,3,4,10) poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 12 May 2016

very nice poem conveying the theme which the poets decided to convey. thank you very much. tony

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Chinedu Dike 23 December 2015

Lovely depiction of sudden romantic moment of pure bliss, occasioned by nature mutual affinity - love at first sight, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned with conviction. Love is whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning, if not carefully nurtured to maintain its bliss. Thanks for sharing Brian. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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