Brian Strand

Freshman - 740 Points (England)

Summer Ball - Poem by Brian Strand

Love
blossomed
suddenly
that evening
they met by chance, in the 'excuse -me' dance

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life

Form: Tetractys


Poet's Notes about The Poem

The Tetractys form was devised by the late English poet Ray Stebbing.The challenge to express a complete thought, profound or comic, witty or wise, within the narrow compass of a five line 20 syllable(1,2,3,4,10) poem.

Comments about Summer Ball by Brian Strand

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/12/2016 12:36:00 AM)


    very nice poem conveying the theme which the poets decided to convey. thank you very much. tony (Report) Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (12/23/2015 6:23:00 PM)


    Lovely depiction of sudden romantic moment of pure bliss, occasioned by nature mutual affinity - love at first sight, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned with conviction. Love is whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning, if not carefully nurtured to maintain its bliss. Thanks for sharing Brian. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 12, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 12, 2015


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