Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Summer Lament Comments

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The temperature keeps soaring
I feel wet from sweat that's pouring
and I'm physically sick from all this sun
If I keep up this perspiring
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Evelyn Macdonald
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Linda Gatiens 26 January 2018

If only that was the case over here! Loved it Evelyn!

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Jean Dament 20 July 2010

You captured how annoying the heat of this summer can be very well here. I had thought about writing a similiar poem too, but wrote about the wind instead. lol I was so happy to feel some cool breeze in the evenings at least. If you care to read my poem called 'The Wind' it would be appreciated. Spiritsong

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Jean Dament 20 July 2010

You captured how annoying the heat of this summer can be very well here. I had thought about writing a similiar poem too, but wrote about the wind instead. lol I was so happy to feel some cool breeze in the evenings at least. If you care to read my poem called 'The Wind' it would be appreciated. Spiritsong

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Leven, Fifeshire, Scotland
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