Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Summer May Comments

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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

Well, there is not much here to comment on. Of course, poems should be short. Even this short. But this is essentially a rhyme. That's it. The problem is that it doesn't say anything. At least, nothing of discernible consequence. GW62

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