Sunday, January 29, 2006

Sun Light Hits The Water..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

SLACK tides, smooth edges,
metal eyelets, drifting
in the cold snow.
MAN overboard,
...
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Ruby Root 04 October 2006

Sad poem David but very creative. Excellent write.

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YOU SET AN INTREPID STAGE HERE, MY GOOD FRIEND...STRONG IMAGERY CARRYS A WELL CRAFTED WORK TO THE FINISH LINE FOR A 10...''''''''FRANK

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