Wednesday, May 13, 2009
Sunlight That Fades Comments
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sunlight that fades
vast over the horizon
like a spread
of jam and marmalade;
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Raj Arumugam
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Rory Hudson
13 May 2009
Some beautiful words reflecting beautiful thoughts. I just find the reference to jam and marmalade a bit out of place in a poem of this nature.
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3/14/2026 2:07:34 AM # 1.0.0
Rory - I looked at the poem in light of your comment about jam and marmalade. Jam and marmalade suggests certain colors and also links with breakfast so I'll leave the words. I'm grateful to you for inviting me to take a more critical look at my poem.