Sunset Poem by Brandi Robbins

Sunset

Rating: 4.2


The most beautiful, young girl
sadly she lost her mind
now she spends her time
hanging out with fake friends and always getting high
barely getting by and struggling everyday
she fights to live her life in every single way
lost her friends and family, they were her light
her mom only wanted what was right
now she walks alone
cant even remember the last time she had a place to call home
the drugs, the thugs, the hookers, the homeless
the only thing she can feel is this loneliness
living in this guilt trip she then decides she cant go on like this

She makes a choice to go to Detox and get clean
it's the hardest thing when all your body does is withdrawl and fien.
each day starts to feel a bit better
she even decides to write her mother a letter
decides to write her mother a letter

2 weeks have now gone by since she has gave up getting high
shes talked to her family and they are so proud
they are even willing to let her come home, when she gets out
but she's picked out a rehab to attend, this life disease and broken pieces, she needs to mend

Shes so smart and has the world ahead of her
all her past mistakes are now dead to her
not usually what is dead inside
now she has nothing to hide so she holds her head high
with so much pride, gone through hell and she survived
the only path she was on was to die
until she stopped and changed her mind
and saved her own lief
you have to move forward and leave the drugs behind
because out of the dark night
she shined bright.

Sunset
Friday, November 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fight,addiction,love,self control,strength
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Addiction is a dark road millions of people have had to walk their selves or with someone they love. This poem is for all you strong addicts thast struggle with your disease daily, keep going and be strong.... one day at time!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 05 December 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Brandi Robbins. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Brandi Robbins 01 December 2018

Thank you Tony, I'm new to writing poems, it's a beautiful way to express yourself.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 December 2018

now she has nothing to hide so she holds her head high with so much pride, gone through and she survived the only path she was on was to die until she stopped and changed her mind....leave the world of the drugs......... a great message especially to the young...... thank u for this beautiful poem. tony

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Brandi Robbins

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