Friday, November 30, 2018

Sunset Comments

Rating: 4.2

The most beautiful, young girl
sadly she lost her mind
now she spends her time
hanging out with fake friends and always getting high
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Brandi Robbins
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Jazib Kamalvi 05 December 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Brandi Robbins. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Brandi Robbins 01 December 2018

Thank you Tony, I'm new to writing poems, it's a beautiful way to express yourself.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 December 2018

now she has nothing to hide so she holds her head high with so much pride, gone through and she survived the only path she was on was to die until she stopped and changed her mind....leave the world of the drugs......... a great message especially to the young...... thank u for this beautiful poem. tony

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Brandi Robbins

Brandi Robbins

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