Sunshine Poem by Tygrr Robertson

Sunshine

Rating: 5.0


An angel walked in.
Like sunshine,
on a warm summer day.
You cast your beauty'
upon me.
And asked if I could,
come out and play.
The attraction to you,
was instant.
No hope for me in,
being resistant.
Don't want to seem,
to persistent.
Please put away,
your running shoes.
Come play with me,
I'm here.
On broken wing
I'll fly to you.
I won't deny these feelings,
I have for you.
I am returning your love.
My heart,
I give to you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jack Tex 14 July 2007

I think you're writing in a realistic way, I wouldn't say idealistic, though it may seem so. The thing is you express yourself so beautifully but as a little hint, you shouldn't worry too much about keeping the rhyme, sometimes it goes bye-bye and there ain't nothing you can do about it. On balance, you rock! All the best Mohammad

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