Sunshine Cloud And Midnight Rain Poem by Enchanting Owl

Sunshine Cloud And Midnight Rain

Rating: 5.0

As a few moons were walking promptly into the realms of Coon's age,
The artist's impression clouded my ethereal cage.
Sunshine cloud is my virtue; midnight rain is my anthem.
I want to reminisce each day vehemently; I don't want to be the victim.

How I wish I could stop time and moment for resuscitation,
To mend the aged wounds and see the diamond radiation.
Putting the memories in a parallel timeline,
to unbind the river of tears and soreness; my outline is my new skyline.

Depression is slithering and crawling like a deceptive snake.
Grief leads like a king with a crown of thorns that offers ache.
Chagrin eats the ebullience and ends the indecision.
Anxiety comforts like a friend with a hoax facade—these are my old visions.

Contagious smiles on each face at every accomplished achievement.
Sparkling eyes to provide intuitive appeasement.
Glittering sweats for accomplishing nonviable missions.
Keenly ears to listen to sound solicited guidance—these are my new vision.

Those were genuine moments of euphoria, downs, and success.
New mentality is a must; I'm a moment-obsessed.
Hot summer is my blanket; cold winter is my pillow.
Only have one life to experience such a time before I close the window.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In my timeline and yours, we encounter our summer clouds and our midnight rain. Summer clouds are those moments when we experience bliss, happiness, accomplishments, and all positive feelings. Midnight rains are those moments we feel down, depressed, anxious, and all negative feelings. This is yin and yang; it balances our emotional journey, and it is our veracity and decision about where to keep or put on the sidelines.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M H 28 August 2023

the title is so captivating, if you read the whole poem, it makes sense. a perfect 5.

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Julrick Verallo 28 August 2023

'Hot summer is my blanket; cold winter is my pillow.' this is so catchyyyyyyyyy

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S S 28 August 2023

this line is so true 'Anxiety comforts like a friend with a hoax facade' thanks for elaborating this theme

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S December 28 August 2023

a solid and well-deserved to be rated 5

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Acir Eryat 28 August 2023

The lines are getting better and better, this line though 'Sunshine cloud is my virtue; midnight rain is my anthem.' It stuck and i love it

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CJ DG 28 August 2023

this sums up everything, I so love it!

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