Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Super Mom Comments

Rating: 5.0

Times are getting hard and not getting better
But one thing that stands and has not broken down is my mom
We've been through the storm an into the slet
But one thing about my mom is she stayed on her two feet
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David Beckham 22 June 2011

It is beautiful. You have introduced characters into your poem that has not only given it a great texture but it has also given a good appeal. It harbors a sensitivity that is genuine and real. Every reader will be able to relate to it. It is romantic and it is sensual. It has me weak at the knees! Tfs 10/10

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David Beckham 22 June 2011

It is beautiful. You have introduced characters into your poem that has not only given it a great texture but it has also given a good appeal. It harbors a sensitivity that is genuine and real. Every reader will be able to relate to it. It is romantic and it is sensual. It has me weak at the knees! Tfs 10/10

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