SurvıVe Me If You Can! Poem by Malaya Roses

SurvıVe Me If You Can!

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Substituted words were unveiled
Smell of past bloodshed, provocative
Hatred created
Acts meant all
Everything taken and threw out
Mind and soul tear apart
Till the end
No surrender could inflict more pain than welcome
Mistaken enemy with lover
Face off the limitless revenge
Being alive and dead was next to my slumber pillow
Tears were reaching heaven and hell
You shall not survive me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rizvana Parveen 21 January 2012

Good composition....

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Wahab Abdul 21 January 2012

smell of past bloodshed, people are provocating others to create hatred among people, , , , they are doing all these abeting works underthe twisted or unveiling the the substitude words yes, words ....good, sympathetic words...means nothing....only cunning eye wash..the acts are accounted.....the atmosphere is heavy...mind and soul are bleeding....this is the very sorry state of the modern human situation................who can survive the protagonist? ....we have to change ourselves....through consious aweareness.....this masage is coveyed in this poem...according to my understanding......thank you poetess for sharing so high class poem....please read my other poems

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