Malaya Roses

Rookie - 219 Points (16/12/ / Malaysia)

Never Come Back To Me - Poem by Malaya Roses

Solitude in grey
Almost here
Undefined portrait of beauty
Mesmerizing wave was silent
Stunning shine of the sun
After many years
Keep hidden in your dark seclusion
Curtain of human
Wash the beast away
Never come back.

Comments about Never Come Back To Me by Malaya Roses

  • Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. (10/8/2011 8:18:00 AM)

    I have to struggle to get this one, i wonder whether the 'Curtain of human' are the barriers of our visualization of what we need to see(the truth, real love, a person's real colours) .... Its a well rounded piece, bigger than my critique.... (Report)Reply

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  • Vipins PuthooranVipins Puthooran (10/7/2011 2:44:00 AM)

    well written..(undefined portrait of beauty never come back to anyone) ..nice message..
    It's a good poem.

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (10/5/2011 9:43:00 AM)

    Strong message, very poetically expressed
    Sometimes indeed better to keep vice at a distance.
    It makes me happy to think I see a healing process going on.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 4, 2011

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