Sweet Poem by Caroline Bulleck

Sweet

Rating: 5.0


I need you like a
Dog needs chocolate. You're poison
In a sweet disguise

Thursday, May 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: deception,haiku,poison
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walkerjohn 29 May 2020

Aloha and Cheers Caroline! Interesting small prose... kinda begs for the 'because'... well 'like does attract like'! Which chocolate is poison? Hopefully not the 'Swiss White'... I have a 'taste' for that! As IAM that kind of dog! Nice vibe though... in a 'sweet disguise'! All of the best from this life, to you, and to all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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