Sweet Pain Poem by Kevin East

Sweet Pain

Rating: 2.5


I am watching sunshine lit clouds.
Can you see them too?
Look at us
Basking in the light of love.
Swimming in blue.
Merging with the colours above.
Of those years ago.
Though apart
Let's watch it grow.
And then,
Like our beauty
Go.
Ah, sweet pain
Will remain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This work glides from onset to close-out...The structure you employ visualy implies an unorthodox rhyme scheme, but as you read it, you realize the metreing is spot-on.....Solid crafting ~FjR~

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