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Hi David, Very different, I like this poem, It's unique but your writing positive. Excellent write.

WHATTA DAY FOR WRITIN' & SINGIN' THEM 60'S CHARTBUSTERS! THEN AGAIN, I CAN'T SING A LICK ANYMORE....& LATELY WRITERS BLOCK HAS GIVEN ME THE KNOCK....S * * *, A * * * * ING RHYME....Wooooooosh! nice write! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

WHATTA DAY FOR WRITIN' & SINGIN' THEM 60'S CHARTBUSTERS! THEN AGAIN, I CAN'T SING A LICK ANYMORE....& LATELY WRITERS BLOCK HAS GIVEN ME THE KNOCK....S * * *, A * * * * ING RHYME....Wooooooosh! nice write! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

paper back writerrrrrrrrrrr, paper back writerrrrrrrrrr, yippeeeeeeee good write david i enjoyed this one, worth a vote so vote i vote for your poemmmmm AJS