Sunday, May 3, 2009

Swinging At Midnight Comments

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I sit here in silence
where it's so dark that I can barely trace
the shadow of smoke escaping from my lips.
I'm secluded here with the squeaking chains of the swing set,
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Amy Backus
chains Cigarettes Nonsense Nostalgic
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Gordon Saunders 03 May 2009

Loved it. sort of compares to how im feeling just now. thanks.

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Shekhar Joshi 03 May 2009

ahhh you have beautifully expressed the feelings of a lonely person here. Imagery is also good as is the flow of poem Excellent poem

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Amy Backus

Amy Backus

New York, USA
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New York, USA
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