Swords Poem by Luka Velickovic

Swords

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We are swinging so swiftly
Our emotions hit each other
'Cause we feed on sadnnes
Of the others
We must stop
If we wanna win
We must stop
Continuing this sin

Wednesday, November 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: emotional
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 17 November 2018

We must stop If we wanna win We must stop Continuing this sin.. this is a call to lead a pure life. we have to stop all that does not lead us mental peace.. tha nku dear poet. tony

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Dave Walker 14 November 2018

Emotions can make us or break us. A great poem.

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