Friday, March 4, 2005

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When i gave my heart to you
It comes witha promise that you'll always be true
That you'll think twice in everything you do
Especially if its about me and you
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Cheneth Jane San Diego
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Junior Pocoloco 11 May 2007

Jane I like your poem. I know the feeling.

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Prakash Nair 04 March 2005

across the lines there lies a feeling of injustice done. beautiful lines arise from a lump in the throat. good.

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