Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Take My Pain Away Comments

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Last night I couldn’t sleep, this is the eighth day
I’m confused what is the purpose of life?
I sit here wondering, contemplating
When will this pain go away
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Kaii Rhodius
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Kaii Rhodius 17 January 2012

Thank you very much and I appreciate that! I actually haven't written any in awhile I'm in the process of publishing my poetry book. So all my poetry is in there. But when I do write some more I'd gladly send you some and I welcome help & advice Thank you!

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Dave Walker 17 January 2012

A really fantastic poem, a fantastic write.

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