Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Take Your Meds Comments

Rating: 4.0

Tablet time, the emotional crime
Going on half past four
A compulsory task maintains the mask
Keeps him of the floor.
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Peter Bain
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Kay Staley 22 September 2015

Confusingly comforting with its psychological tones of honesty and feeling. I enjoyed the uniqueness of this poem. Just a note: the second line of the second paragraph has surly instead of surely.I like the idea of being a conformist just for the benefit of others...they would be hurt and never understand if we broke the mode into the person that we are supposed to be.

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