Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Tanah Lapang Comments

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aku berdiri di tanah lapang
mencoba mencari apa yang terbuang
mungkin tercecer
atau malahan sudah hilang
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Petra Patricia
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Petra Patricia 08 November 2011

thanks you for your comment and you're right, there's no language barrier for poem. so this poem is about my searching of something in the field and what things can I do in the field.

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Ramesh Rai 08 November 2011

though i could not understand the meaning of your poem. but language does not matter. poem is infact the expression of emotions and feelings. so, keep it up. wish you good luck.

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Petra Patricia

Petra Patricia

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