Thursday, July 2, 2009

Tangata Manu (The Birdmen) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Somewhere between Easter Island and
Santiago skims an ocean skiff loaded with
slumped islanders bound within the teetering
cargo hold. In the distance can be seen the
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Alison Cassidy 02 July 2009

This is a very powerful, moving story with some excellent descriptive passages. I wouldn't call it poetry, though. It is more like a work of prose that has been chopped into lines and verses. Your final stanza is particularly compelling. Love, Allie x x x x

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