Tell Me, Please Poem by Liyo Denorte

Tell Me, Please

Rating: 5.0


to tell you honestly,
I’m tired of waiting
waiting for you to say your name
to tell me how was your day
or ask me about my day
to tell me how's it going
to tell me about yourself
or ask me about myself
all you got to say is hi
and hi
and hi again
and again
every time we have the chance
to pass each other’s path
why was that?
is that all there is to it
is that all there is to say?
its quite been a long time
we've been eyeing each other, but
we remained complete strangers, still
roaming around aimlessly and
entangled with wordless mystery
of what am i to you
do you like me?
or not..
tell me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liyo Denorte 19 March 2010

@ Adriana. ey, thanks, i considered that as a compliment. =) well, yeah, it's such a terrible thing to keep on waiting and wondering what's really going on. i wish there is a Love/Like detector to determine how this person feels about somebody. LOL you know what, i really feel sad earlier and thus this poem came up. but hearing your situation, i kinda feel fine now.. oh well, good luck to both of us!

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Adriana Ellis 19 March 2010

I really like this poem. I can relate to this. Cause theres this person that ive known and we used to be really great friends and now were in high school and he can text me and stuff but when we see each other in the hall ways its like um ok wheres the hi..its like both of us are afraid to say hi. But anyways i loved your poem and i give you a 10.

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