Tell Me Your Secret Poem by Chelsey Mcewan

Tell Me Your Secret



Tell me your secret
I promise not to tell
I'll gard it safely at the bottom of the well


Tell me your secret tell me tellme please
I won't breve a word not evan to the bees



Tell me your secret
It will be a paddle in my mouth
Not Evan the sea can make me spip it out

Thursday, January 5, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: bees
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Buckley 17 January 2012

Nice to see someone so young as yourself writing poetry. I like this one, but if I can be so bold, please check your spelling. (gard /guard....breve / breath...Evam / even...spip / spit) I know you want to make a good first impression with your art, so take a little extra time to proof read before posting, and make sure it is correct... Keep on writing... you have a talent for this

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