Andrew D Robertson

Rookie (March 25,1986 / Orange, California)

Temptation Sensation - Poem by Andrew D Robertson

Time to go now, but not for good.
Sleep is calling and so is food.
Needing to clean, I run abound
Till I find you on the ground.

Now, wanting things I should not want,
And feeling things which I should not feel.
My heart beating like a ballistic drum,
I help you up just to feel.

To feel such beauty,
It would fill me with glee.
And by your leave,
My hands will roam free.

Now I know the things I feel
Will bring happiness and love anew.
Temptation is explicit,
Yet, it is nothing without you.


Comments about Temptation Sensation by Andrew D Robertson

  • (4/27/2010 12:48:00 AM)


    Sharp, jagged rhythem, seems left to its own in parts, some unfinished thoughts that force to reader to use his/her imagination. I like it. Unusual. . I had a problem with the word glee though. Scary word. Gave me chills. But an interesting, thoughtful read. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 7, 2010



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