Sunday, February 8, 2009

Thankyou Comments

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Thank you
to the men it my life
To Mark
you taught me
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Mary Green
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James B. Earley 08 February 2009

Truly a blast...from the past...brilliantly executed!

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Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2009

It sounds like the writer has learned a lot from her experiences. Not all pleasant. I did detect some anger. But mostly I find a mature sense of perspective in her words. That is good. So is the poem. The verticle structure is one I am not fond of, but the poem itself is a fine one. It does have some flow to it. GW62

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