Your poem is a little too short & so disappoints me to read it. I would put 'Awww ' in front of 'that double rainbow' for emphasis. I have noticed that all your poems tend to be too brief-can you not try to add more imagery & description for our interest sake?
Ravensong
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Your poem is a little too short & so disappoints me to read it. I would put 'Awww ' in front of 'that double rainbow' for emphasis. I have noticed that all your poems tend to be too brief-can you not try to add more imagery & description for our interest sake? Ravensong