'That Girl Was I..' Poem by Angel Taw

'That Girl Was I..'

Rating: 5.0


Heart slowly stopping,
Soul easily fading.
She's over there,
Going nowhere.
Lying, getting colder,
She's not breathing any longer..

She took a gun
And now everything's done..
She is gone!

I see people crying, asking why,
Why they had to say good-bye..
I just tell them, with cold eyes
'Those are only lies!
You never knew what love means..
You took away her dreams..'

Slowly, I walk away
Fading in the day..
I look up in the sky..
'That girl was I'..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ron Knight 12 January 2009

You are a great writer with lots of potential keep on writing your feelings down and don't give up or then you will just become someone fading into memories.Be strong others need you.

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