Wednesday, June 22, 2016

That Little Thing Comments

Rating: 4.8

The parting gift
that you gave me last night
I do not wish to keep it
It might cause a fight
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Zainab Hussein MNSR
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Soha Zidan 20 September 2016

How beautiful! I love the simplicity in flow of ideas, and the fact that a gift that one day had made one happy would suddenly become an evil omen. Thanks for sharing.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 21 July 2016

I consider it an evil omen It makes my heart broken And leaves the wounds open that little thing PLZ do not. it is a mere sign of sincerity and love. keep the little thing with you. Nice poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 June 2016

It makes my heart broken And leaves the wounds open......love, sorrow, sadness, parting....... relationship..... friendship..... all come in this poem......... very nice poem. full of emotions. thank you dear poet......... tony

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