Saturday, October 24, 2015

That Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

That night, the summer night I first met you
I can close my eyes and see that night shades of glow and blue
A strange procession was passing by me, the years before I saw your face
Went by me with chaos; heart longing and fears, except my dreams and longing for success and grace
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Roseann Shawiak 24 October 2015

Poignant and succinctly portraying the sadness of never being able to hold onto a love you once thought would be yours. Lonely years filled with empty tears of love. Great poem indeed! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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