Luis Ruiz

That Particular Day

Some say 'the day will come, when all falls down',
where have u been,
not @ the place u were hopin 2 b seen,
though that day has surpassed,
and I go on 2 say...
and not letting any hate take effect from that of my past;
'What has already fallen, cannot fall anymore',
since the very beginning,
the thoughts of getting better
is the only thing that has changed..
cause the days going to bed, crying;
and the tearz that I had made
dropped from my face and
only grew the love I had 4 my family...

2 b even greater, than what I feel I can do
is my greatest mission in life besides
forming much joy and laughter
from now til later...
and I ain't sorry
4 the mixxed emotions,
cuz u dont know how it made me feel,
especially from what has come from what I didn't expect,
only I know what it is I was feeling,
and nothing u say or do now,
can cure the saddness that I inherited on that particular day,
and those I thought 2 b closest to me
weren't there...
thru times most needed,
goes 2 show the pain that still circulates around my brain,
but it wasn't enough to stop the happiness
I still set out 2 give 2 others

Now here in time
and I ain't even got to come down a level,
so high at a height unknown,
having dreams that lie way beyond the clouds
and this is opposite of what I was feeling....
ON THat Particular Day.........

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 11, 2009

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