Luis Ruiz

This Place Unknown

I wake up 2 a place with sunshine and rain,
I don't remember how I got 2 this place
filled with no feeling and pain,
could it b that I am lost?
The last thing I remember is laying down
and after that I cannot explain
Because what happens after that
Is a mystery 2 me
I awake once more, feeling in a daze,
and I alwayz have 2 run
2 try and get out of a maze
that only seems 2 get farther
In this place unknown...

These places I go dont last,
some of them remind me of my past;
I fall asleep in this place I have no clue about
and wake 2 a place I do remember having been in
more than once,
and the only thing different,
is that I have a sense of feeling and much more pain....
'In This Place Unknown'

Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 10, 2009

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