Wednesday, January 2, 2013

That's All I Want To Be Comments

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The smile you wear on your face, the intense look you have in your eyes,
The truth your lips ever speak, the peaceful blue clouds in your skies.
The drive behind your success, the strength you find in your weakness,
The joy in your every laughter, your good, your better and your best.
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Micheal Lambert
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Patrick Czyz 01 September 2015

With a poem like that it will be impossible to not win someone's heart.

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Rachana Mcpherson 03 January 2013

Nice flow. Good comparisons. An overall good poem (Y)

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