Saturday, April 21, 2018

That There's More To The Sound Of Running Water Comments

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Open my eyes
figuratively
so I can see
what I missed before
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vince gullaci
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Robert Murray Smith 22 April 2018

Vince, I would tie the heading into the poem.

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Vince Gullaci 22 April 2018

That's a good comment Robert.I'm going to rewrite the poem closer to what it was originally.I had cut the of it, Vince.

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